When writing testimony to a legislative committee in the Montana Legislature, it’s important to be clear, personal and direct.
Introduce Yourself and Your Connection to the Issue
State the Purpose of Your Testimony
Tell Your Story
Explain the Broader Impact
Make a Clear Request
Thank the Committee
Conclude by thanking the committee for their time and offering to answer any questions.
Introduction:
"Good morning, Chair [Last Name] and members of the committee. My name is [Your Full Name], and I am the owner of [Your Business] located in [Town/City]. We are a [brief description of your business, e.g., ‘small restaurant serving visitors to visitors outside Seeley Lake’]. I’m also a member of [any relevant organizations, e.g., ‘the Montana Restaurant and Retail Association]."
Purpose:
"I am here today to testify in support of Senate Bill XXX, which would [brief description of what the bill does]."
Your Story:
"In recent years, our business has faced [describe a challenge or issue related to the bill, e.g., ‘a decline in visitor numbers due to lack of funding for tourism marketing’]. For example, last year, we saw a [specific number or percentage, e.g., ‘15% drop in bookings’], which impacted our ability to hire local staff. This bill would help businesses like mine by [specific benefit, e.g., ‘providing better marketing support to attract visitors to our region’]."
Broader Impact:
"This issue doesn’t just affect my business — it affects our entire community. Many local jobs rely on visitors, from restaurants to retail shops. A stronger visitor economy means more revenue for local businesses, more jobs, and a healthier community overall."
Request:
"I respectfully ask you to support Senate Bill XXX to help businesses like mine continue to thrive and support our communities."
Closing:
"Thank you for your time and consideration. I would be happy to answer any questions you may have."
This structure will help you deliver clear, personal and impactful testimony that resonates with lawmakers and highlights the real-world consequences of their decisions.
(With Emphasis on the Broad Impact of Tourism on the Entire Economy)
Use these questions to clarify your story, highlight the role of tourism in your business, and explain the impact of tourism on the broader community. These questions will help you identify compelling points for your testimony and show how interconnected tourism is with other sectors of the economy.
How does your business depend on visitors?
If visitation increases, what positive impacts does your business experience?
If visitation decreases, how does that affect your business?
How does tourism directly or indirectly support your business operations?
How does tourism support businesses that are not traditionally seen as part of the visitor economy?
How do farmers, ranchers, and agricultural producers benefit from the visitor economy?
What are some examples of how tourism-related businesses support the local supply chain?
How does tourism-related spending ripple through your community?
How does tourism benefit your community economically?
How does tourism enhance the quality of life in your community?
What challenges does your community face with tourism, and how can they be addressed?
How do visitors differ from new residents in their impact on your community?
What personal story or example best illustrates the impact of tourism on your business or community?
Why should lawmakers care about the visitor economy?
What specific outcome do you want to see from legislation or policies affecting tourism?
What’s the main takeaway or message you want the committee to remember?
How can you make your story relatable and memorable?
Are there numbers, facts or data that strengthen your testimony?
These questions will help you think broadly about how tourism impacts your business and the wider network of businesses and services in your community. Your testimony can highlight the far-reaching effects of tourism, showing lawmakers how vital the visitor economy is for a diverse range of industries and the overall well-being of Montana’s communities.